As you do not write a clear enough introduction, it is unclear from this whether you have picked two different types of writing. It looks as though you have looked at an e-zine and an e-newspaper, which are very similar. You do identify some technical elements and draw some comparisons, but your analysis is too brief and you do not use enough examples. You don't think about interactive elements such as hyperlinks and graphics.
As you do not write a clear enough introduction, it is unclear from this whether you have picked two different types of writing. It looks as though you have looked at an e-zine and an e-newspaper, which are very similar. You do identify some technical elements and draw some comparisons, but your analysis is too brief and you do not use enough examples. You don't think about interactive elements such as hyperlinks and graphics.
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